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What of Love... (Jesse Jaymz & I - Duet Thingy)
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What of Love... (Jesse Jaymz & I - Duet Thingy) |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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What is the cure For a battered and broken heart? When the one you love the most Rips your world apart When you once seen feelings That you thought were oh so true But now there's nothing there And you're left without a clue I used to feel love When I looked into your eyes And now I start to wonder Was that all just a disguise? Nan Love's fanciful like blush of spring Embraced by mirthful ray Blithe synergy as birds on wing A tandem flight its way Love's like a weald of buttercups Assent to breeze's sway Vast golden meadows reaching up From gilded bed they lay Love's fancy best unplucked on lea As floret blooms array As lovebirds freed fly marri-ly Love freed shall find its way Waft every crest upon your destined sea Embrace the Wave of Serendipity Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy Refurl with sail for all eternity Nancy Ness [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 05-07-2001).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I enjoyed this very much, you two...such differing feelings..both well done, one sunny, one dark...Yes, love can be both. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Well done!!! I enjoyed this very much!  |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice work you two, I found this to be very original.  I really like how you put this together, the question and an answer thing really worked out superbly. Great work you two! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow, you two! Very creative! I really enjoyed this read. You guys came up with something really great here. Great work! --Marie Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
i loved working with you nan *hugs* i like how you added to this. love ya jesse And I cry to the alleyway |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
^_^ well done both of you.. I'd rate this; a success!! Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
this is great work you two, very creative and original. you work very well together Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I really love this! Two very different styles, composed to a great duet! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Wonderful work, both of you! Loved both your parts. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I sincerely thank you all for your kind words - Writing fresh material on an age-old subject can be quite a challenge.. Writing with you was a pleasure, Jesse...  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done you two!! woh00!!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey this is fantastic! Well donr both of you Enjoyed very much. Maree |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I really like this one! Very original, and beautifully done. You two work well!  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ohh very nice indeed. I enjoyed reading you both Maree |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i enjoyed this poem greatly...awesome job here i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Doubt and reassurance... I like how you wrote this, it's a good example of how the duet club is meant to work. Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Tonight's my night, for doing things I should already have done, and reading poems I should long since have read...each a major pile! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thanks muchly, Ed... |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
wow. beautiful!!! |
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