What of Love... (Jesse Jaymz & I - Duet Thingy)

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Nan

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0 posted 2001-05-06 09:49 AM

Jesse

What is the cure
For a battered and broken heart?
When the one you love the most
Rips your world apart
When you once seen feelings
That you thought were oh so true
But now there's nothing there
And you're left without a clue
I used to feel love
When I looked into your eyes
And now I start to wonder
Was that all just a disguise?

Nan

Love's fanciful like blush of spring
Embraced by mirthful ray
Blithe synergy as birds on wing
A tandem flight its way

Love's like a weald of buttercups
Assent to breeze's sway
Vast golden meadows reaching up
From gilded bed they lay

Love's fancy best unplucked on lea
As floret blooms array
As lovebirds freed fly marri-ly
Love freed shall find its way

Waft every crest upon your destined sea
Embrace the Wave of Serendipity
Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy
Refurl with sail for all eternity
Nancy Ness

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 05-07-2001).]

Martie

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1 posted 2001-05-06 11:27 AM

I enjoyed this very much, you two...such differing feelings..both well done, one sunny, one dark...Yes, love can be both.

Poet deVine

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2 posted 2001-05-06 11:56 AM

Well done!!! I enjoyed this very much!

Allan Riverwood

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3 posted 2001-05-06 12:30 PM

Nice work you two, I found this to be very original.

I really like how you put this together, the question and an answer thing really worked out superbly.
Great work you two!
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

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4 posted 2001-05-06 05:11 PM

Wow, you two! Very creative! I really enjoyed this read. You guys came up with something really great here. Great work!

--Marie

Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry.

Jesse Jaymz
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5 posted 2001-05-06 08:19 PM

i loved working with you nan *hugs* i like how you added to this.

love ya
jesse

And I cry to the alleyway
Confess all to the rain
But I lie straight to the mirror
The one I've broken to match my face

Yu Lan
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6 posted 2001-05-07 02:36 AM

^_^ well done both of you.. I'd rate this; a success!!

Lynne

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7 posted 2001-05-07 02:56 PM

this is great work you two, very creative and original. you work very well together

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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8 posted 2001-05-08 04:30 PM

I really love this! Two very different styles, composed to a great duet!

Elizabeth

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9 posted 2001-05-09 11:19 PM

Wonderful work, both of you! Loved both your parts.

Nan

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10 posted 2001-05-10 07:02 AM

I sincerely thank you all for your kind words - Writing fresh material on an age-old subject can be quite a challenge.. Writing with you was a pleasure, Jesse...

Dopey Dope

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11 posted 2001-05-13 02:38 PM

Well done you two!!
woh00!!!

Dark Angel
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12 posted 2001-05-13 09:18 PM

Hey this is fantastic!
Well donr both of you

Enjoyed very much.

Maree

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13 posted 2001-05-20 10:19 AM

I really like this one! Very original, and beautifully done. You two work well!

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Dark Angel
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14 posted 2001-05-21 07:50 PM

Ohh very nice indeed.
I enjoyed reading you both

Maree

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15 posted 2001-05-27 09:04 PM

i enjoyed this poem greatly...awesome job here

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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16 posted 2003-05-16 01:45 PM

Doubt and reassurance... I like how you wrote this, it's a good example of how the duet club is meant to work.

Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world.
~Percy Bysshe Shelley

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17 posted 2006-09-29 10:02 PM

Tonight's my night, for doing things I should already have done, and reading poems I should long since have read...each a major pile!

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Nan

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18 posted 2006-09-30 04:29 PM

Thanks muchly, Ed...

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19 posted 2008-02-06 02:12 PM

wow. beautiful!!!

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