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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Your words are balloons. They snap in the heat. Burst from the inside. The bubbles are rising to the smeared surface of mistakes taken. Claw your hand up, up, up, up, up, up, to the sun! Reach! Just tear through that water, and touch one more sphere before we burst from the inside. My words are balloons. They break in the heat. The bubbles are slowing, this surface of craters is spinning, down, down, down, down, down. Break! Just tear through the sky, shudder on down to the sea. And let me see once, floating on the waves, that burst... from the inside. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I wanna be president of the Mikey fan club!  ever tried to burst a ballon by sitting on it? it can be quite painful. And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(laughing at Liz) interesting write Squirrel dude... made me think of cartoon characters and the dialog ballons... and then twist it all into a two dimensionsal world where we are all just flat characters.... not your intent.. just my warped mind today.. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
My intent was darkly erotic. I like your version better.  |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
darkly erotic?? let me ponder on this...For some reason Liz's and your's combined is making me think of "IT" *shudders* I'm gonna havta sleep with a nightlight now!! eesh lol If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lol well sorrreey  And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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