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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Some Men Feel They hide well, the deepest part but, some men, feel… beyond romance, beyond daily they feel it is their grumbling times when they think we WE are one of the them… and they forget… some Men feel… and just let go… into walls into arguments sometimes, into faces… some just let go others…well, they…hold it in… they… become Poets. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Interesting observation, Karilea. I think I will look at their words differently given your insights. Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes Karilea...some men choose to write it out! And to them, I say, Bravo! Excellent write. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
shhhhh it's supposed to be a secret |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Very good and funny poem! I definitely agree with a lot of it. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
darn!!! Now everyone will know our secret!!! lol Great job. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hehe... nice, very nice. The poets let it out too, they do it in verse though, instead of throwing something. Course, I do both  Oh, make me Thine forever |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Sunshine.....I cheated and looked at this site, but I REALLY like the insight in your poem. As I man I realize sometimes it takes courage to feel. Thanks for letting me sneak a peak. Larry |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
excellent words of wisdom penned,,, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
wonderful words, Lady. I miss this place. I wonder if the majority of poets are men or women.  Just something you made me wonder. Lovely to be here. Jenn I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
I love when a man is honest..and can write :-) Double luck! Kudos to all of those who honestly portray their feelings through words!! Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
is that why I don't misshape my knuckles anymore? hmmmm... yes..I agree...punching a wall is focusing the anperpain to a very small point FLASH gone poetry is like that too soemtimes thank you for this Karilea thoughtful wise and reflective |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
oh very nice, well writen! and so very true! |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
and some are very humble. Very good write Sunshine Keep Shine'in Love, |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Some may be poets without words, just feelings. Loved this one. martyjo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Latearrival, you arrived at a perfect time, this time. I needed this exact poem, exactly now....but I would never have stumbled upon it. And Sunshine, this.....simply is me. Sometimes I think no one knows. You know. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
This would be a good day for me to ponder these insightful words.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Yes....curse that it is to us in this world, we do. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sunshine, Time for this one to be lifted up. It has a special meaning to me at this time. Thank you "late" |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
How very true! I believe all men feel but most don't seem to know how to express it properly. Actually , the old school teaching was that real men shouldn't allow their feelings to show. Thank God, younger generations are more expressive. Rae |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Karilea, it is in the feelings that we men fear our vulnerabilities may betray us. For, when it comes to communicating with the distaff sex, we seldom are a match for anything other than the volume in which we express our indignation that we are in way over our heads. But, you'll never get me to admit that! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
OMG....Maybe a repost is in motion. Did I write this? Hugs.... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Liked this, I've posting or will in the mornong) a poem in the morning that takes on the whole woman/male situation, straight and to the point. WORD TO HUSBANDS . . . To keep your marriage brimming With love in the loving cup, Whenever you're wrong, admit it; Whenever you're right, shut up |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Sunshine! Well said ... would love to see this on the main site. Love the truth in your poem. Smiles, Ms. E |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
My secret to marriage, know the line between verbose and divorce |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Olias! It's been a long time! Welcome home! |
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