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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Will you remember the last note played as it dies? Will it hold its final gloaming in your view? Will it shade out new notes made in your mind? Will you recall its grace and sprawl, its silken weight? How it spindled down, apart, upon sine waves? |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I love the one's that question... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
some resonate forever |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you both. I lopped off the final verse, so it would have this incomplete, unsettled feeling about it. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've held those moments... thank you, Mike. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
mike, you already know that you're wonderful.. wonderous write mr. squirrel. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
love you squirrely one....it does linger, after you have finished reading...nicely done ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
hhhmmmmmmmmm. .. drools. I am in a quite insane mood today. And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Mike- masterfully done... as always. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
thx all |
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