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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2003-09-18 02:45 PM




plaster
your words
all over
my bathroom stall soul
grind
deep
down
within
my
crushed velvet thoughts
leave
your sweaty
imprints
upon my
bubble gum tongue
go ahead...
you know
you want to
you know
it's
the only place
you
have
total
control
go on...
leave
your sweaty
imprints
grind
deep
down
within
my
crushed velvet thoughts..



If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-18-2003 02:51 PM).]

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2003-09-18 03:38 PM


Intense!
Skyfire
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since 2000-12-27
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2 posted 2003-09-18 04:21 PM


*speechless*

Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously
"Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese. "
--G. K.Chesterto

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-09-18 09:03 PM


Kristen . . . this is hmm mmm yep
brilliant . . .  mannnnn
xxoo

Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
4 posted 2003-09-19 02:37 PM


Wow..

Also must add that I enjoy your critique message too..

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