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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2003-09-13 04:49 PM


make love to my mind
crawl inside
darkness beckons
cobweb binds, my hands and mouth
come be my muse
entrap me
wrap me
with obtuse, notions
diamonds
glittering snow
follow me darling
we'll be late for the show
I have paid your fare
no need for excuse
just fall into my mind
let me be your muse



If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.


[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-13-2003 05:03 PM).]

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Duncan
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1 posted 2003-09-13 05:26 PM


Damn, and I just screened in the porch.  
Excellent write btw....

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-09-13 09:48 PM


Oh my  . . .
whoever inspired this
is one lucky man . . .
beautiful Kris truly
just oooh I adore this I do
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (09-13-2003 09:52 PM).]

Wind
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3 posted 2003-09-13 10:55 PM


this is another masterpiece

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-09-15 09:34 AM


ohh man this needs to breathe  . . .
bsquirrel
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5 posted 2003-09-15 06:02 PM


Yes please...
Ceinwyn
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6 posted 2003-09-15 07:52 PM




gawd guys....you're too sweet...I'm happy now

Sue...KISSEEEEYYY FACE I'm sucha girl tonight..sorry second wind kicking in..that's what I get for working overtime

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Ceinwyn
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7 posted 2003-09-16 06:06 PM




    


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.


[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-16-2003 09:35 PM).]

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