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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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This is a good one. It's been a good long while since I've had one this good. Lurching through the sun-dappled morning as though the light will burn me. There's a feeling of deja vu here. A real sense of broken circles finding their terminus. I'd forgotten what it's like. All of your possessions suddenly turning awful in meaning. Everything's right in its place and yet seems unsettled. I hold onto the future like a single board within the water, paddling hard, clutching for splinters. The incurred pain will remind me there is more to this body than selfish desires. I love someone, the waves will remind me. I love her. If I could just see her eyes again, how they waver with grace and blaze with new knowledge, how they change under lights to match a new peace, how they tremble and wait and want a shared trace ... If I could just see her eyes again, she could see mine, and I would wade out of this shallow pool, into her arms. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, has she read this'un yet? It's beautiful. It spells out the word love. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful ache, the last lines perfection |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
um, i love someone, i love you, n i love her for inspiring this! he he.  perfect. just, ack, no words are coming out! Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Right there with you Mikey I'd forgotten what it's like. All of your possessions suddenly turning awful in meaning. Everything's right in its place and yet seems unsettled. I hold onto the future like a single board within the water, paddling hard, clutching for splinters. brilliant lines aching, but brilliant xxoo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Filled with an ache, a needful one.. I don't know exactly what to say about this one, it made me a bit teary eyed. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Mikey, I can only say... Beautiful... ~Tier |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
as usual it is a materpiece And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Awww, you're all too sweet. Thank you. |
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