I don't want to write about you anymore..

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I don't want to write about you anymore..

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-05 12:23 PM

You say you fear thunder..
i say
it's
merely noise.

i should
not
be afraid
of you.

i shouldn't
cower,
I promise to
welcome
lonliness..

i'm chasing
the wind..
it's a dusty day.
Teary eyed, rosey cheeks..
i accepted
the fact that
it
wouldn't be warm
again..

giving away my glory
i can feel
you watching me..

reminding
me of
the arms
i'd claimed, oh,
i missed you for awhile but..

lightning
is far
worse..

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-09-05 03:48 AM

mere noise indeed . . .

you write with grace, Meg
and this I feeeeeel the bittersweet
kind of like copper . . .
Beautiful writing
xxoo

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-09-05 10:21 AM

"reminding
me of
the arms
i'd claimed, oh,
i missed you for awhile but..

lightning
is far
worse.."

Powerful...as usual..

Love the new pic!

Susan

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2003-09-05 12:21 PM

An ouch, an aww and an mmm.

Pretty much runs the gamut.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-09-06 03:30 PM

what the squirrely one said..

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

5 posted 2003-09-06 07:40 PM

I don't speak baffled gibberish so I couldn't tell you what the others said, but I am in awe of this

insanity is not a crime

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2003-09-06 08:13 PM

Ditto, what they said, and,i dont want to write about him anymore.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

7 posted 2003-09-07 02:37 PM

I like. The opening line really drew me into this and you kept me throughout it. Congratulations on wonderfulness.

[This message has been edited by Allysa (09-08-2003 02:38 PM).]

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