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Wind
since 2002-10-12
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I could never learn that something as ugly, ugly as you could create splendor, too beautiful to be real. And for a second there- I touched light, you brought color to my grey. This red light shining through glass walls and iron bars, And I am helpless, struggle would be self destruction when caught within this web of lies. It ends right were we started, and I'd be a fool to speak again But tonight is cold, and I long for warmth So wrap me up, wrap me up and pull me down… These strings weren’t made for music insanity is not a crime [This message has been edited by Wind (08-30-2003 11:53 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
that something as ugly, ugly as you could create splendor Reading these lines at first i thought this was a poem about me  Seriously though Liz, this is amazing writing your writing gets stronger and stronger with a depth of one who's aged beyond her years |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
maybe Raphael...just maybe it was the fact that I didn't go to sleep until 4:30 last night, and I was going insane. insanity is not a crime |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Liz, you have so many layers within your writing. I love the way you explore all the dimensions of your heart and mind, and then find ways to gift us with bits and pieces of YOU. I enjoyed this write, sweet gal. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thanks...it was a song..not really my head or heart. but I guess thats where music comes from..I guess. Thanks guys insanity is not a crime |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
And for a second there- I touched light, you brought color to my grey. at a risk of sounding cheesy...you always bring colour to my grey.  and the ending? a masterpiece. i want to steal the ending!!!!  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I was watching a spider.  and don't worry..cheese is good.insanity is not a crime |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Cheese in moderation, always in moderation. I like to keep my cheesy outbursts to a minimum. A spider! I like. found a humumgous one in my bath, I caught him in a pint glass and set him freeeeeeeeeeee. never drown spiders, however big or small, theyre nice! p.s i thought i was replying, then i hit the button, and realised i was starting a new topic when it told me i had not entered a title. see? cheesiness did me no good. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gah, you write so good... I love this muchly. Especially the last line. mooofuuu.. [This message has been edited by Kaoru (08-31-2003 09:03 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lol..same thing happened to me. I do it all the time. no really..I was watching this huge spider spinning te web..it was really cool. and then I remembered these words and I was like I wish I could write like that and so I did. kinda. I make little sense today. And Meg..yeah, but did you dig it  oh I l#ve you guysinsanity is not a crime |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Liz: another beauty . . . So wrap me up, wrap me up and pull me down… ahh yes I know, I know sometimes some sort of comfort overrides sanity *smile* xxoo |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
"On candystriped legs, the spiderman comes..." |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
thanks you two..and that's just scary. where is that from? insanity is not a crime |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Lullaby, by the Cure. I love love love that song. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
yeah..the cure scare me. like the song burn (shivers) ugh...screaching noises and drums. well I tolerate it sometimes but yeah.. we can't agree on everything though. oh my..i am craving pizza very badly. very very badly  insanity is not a crime |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
"And I feel it all fading and paling, and I'm begging to drag you down with me, to kick the last nail in/Yeah, I like you in that like I like you to scream" from Fascination Street or "Monday you can hold your head. Tuesday, Wednesday stay in bed. Thursday, watch the walls instead. It's Friday I'm in love." from Friday I'm In Love or "Dancing in the deepest ocean, twisting in the water, you're just like a dream." from Just Like Heaven or "Something small falls out of your mouth/and we laugh/A prayer for something better/A prayer for something better." from One Hundred Years Genius, if you ask me. I'll take some 'za. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
ummm yeah. I..like..rock.. I'd say something sweet and mellow..but as it is..I am having a meltdown... I am having trouble with my brain..stupid brain..stoopid...brayn insanity is not a crime |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ahhh dont forget this one . . . "If you die", you said, "so do I" , you said . . . listening to them now, freaky |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
um yeah..I listenned to that song. it now scares me more than climbing up the walls. ok..the spiderman comes to eat me for dinner? umm...and I did this why? because I trusted you and I know I am a chicken and tonight I will be lieing in be for hours (as usual) not able to sleep because I am afraid of unknown forces. but the song is pretty...honest...just... insanity is not a crime |
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