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Tramp Poet
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Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2003-08-26 05:40 PM


Dreaming again…

Heart set aflame
kisses made of fire
again, again and again.
Pouting lips beckon
skin touchable, soft
is that my lover?

promise full of touches
setting fire to fire
lips moist, inviting.
Might just be dreaming
hard to say, right now
can you whisper to me?

Fiery traces in secret places
fingers explore the shapes
passion erupting, consuming.
Wakened, startled, sweating
hoping for premonition
is that my lover?


~~~~~~



© Copyright 2003 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-08-27 07:15 AM


Beautifull depicted .. Another dream?..

Not unless you wake.

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-08-28 01:53 AM


nice write wish i could dream
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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3 posted 2003-08-28 10:58 AM


Daniel, a beautiful dream
and writing . . .
*smile*
xxoo

Annie78
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here then there then back here
4 posted 2005-02-09 09:29 PM


i remember when you thought of this as me
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

Musicmaker1969
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5 posted 2006-05-15 02:48 AM


This is a beautiful love poem here.  Full of emotion and questions all at once.  Not sure young members should read it, but it certain is a beautiful rendition for anyone who is truly in love.  Wonderfully expressed.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

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