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Wind
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0 posted 2003-08-26 04:41 PM



I enjoy
every moment
that you suffer-
Useless ashes
twist and turn
while nothing matters

sight is not possible
when left in the shadows

sometimes
I take
the word bleed
and make it mine

I wonder were the laughter goes
when nobody’s here to hear it?

And I’m home again
right where you left me
head banging truth
that word still tastes bitter

Oh and they’ll save you now
there’s the ‘L’ word again
you want to take it back?

I can hear them laughing now…

flash back:
I cry
you stand

and nobody cares anymore

“Not I” said the dog
“Not I” said the cat
“Not I” said the pig

I do it by myself
And leave not a crumb for you



insanity is not a crime

[This message has been edited by Wind (08-28-2003 09:55 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Liz - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-08-26 08:13 PM


Liz:

I cannot wait to read you when your twenty

sometimes
I take
the word bleed
and make it mine

priceless lines
xxoo

Kaoru
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2 posted 2003-08-26 08:21 PM


"sometimes
I take
the word bleed
and make it mine"

Damn..

I'm so excited that you posted, too.. *giggle*

Awesome write, I'm saving it.

Wind
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3 posted 2003-08-26 08:50 PM


Sue- thanks sweet. unless I've gone insane by then and they have me locked up- it's possible

Meg- you have no idea how funny it is to see you write the word 'giggle.' ha. haha

insanity is not a crime

timothysangel1973
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4 posted 2003-08-26 11:09 PM


"sight is not possible
when left in the shadows"

...wonderful thoughts Wind, I feel this way sometimes...


"I wonder were the laughter goes
when nobody’s here to hear it?"

...good question my poetic friend...


Beautiful write, very much enjoyed!

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-08-27 04:17 PM


Dont worry Liz when they lock you up at least you'll have me around to talk to grins..or will that thought turn you even more insane? grins
Wind
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6 posted 2003-08-27 04:20 PM


TA- thanks, you are so sweet.

Raph- no, so far it hasn't gotten me yet. grins

insanity is not a crime

Aenimal
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7 posted 2003-08-28 01:52 AM


Liz yuo have to something about that eye problem of yours...and your greenish skin..are you eating okay?
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8 posted 2003-08-28 07:53 AM


they will lock you up liz, no matter what, and me to, then we can finally meet within those padded walls! yep

quote:
twist and turn
while nothing maters




is that not suppossed to be matters?
ri

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

Wind
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9 posted 2003-08-28 09:54 AM


ah...I'm gonna hurt both of you

insanity is not a crime

[This message has been edited by Wind (08-28-2003 09:56 AM).]

gemjop
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10 posted 2003-08-28 10:04 AM


i just...love you.
littlewing
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11 posted 2003-08-28 10:57 AM


Good God, all in the same mental ward?
will drive the doctors mad . . .
would be fun though
*smile*
yw

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12 posted 2003-08-28 01:05 PM


That's the first time I've ever seen an angstfest married to a Spin 'n' Say.
Wind
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13 posted 2003-08-28 01:46 PM


yeah..we drive them crazy...join the party

and um..what?

insanity is not a crime

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14 posted 2003-08-28 06:23 PM


quote:

“Not I” said the dog
“Not I” said the cat
“Not I” said the pig



That reminds me of those old Spin 'n' Says. Or is it Speak 'n' Spin? Those ripcord-activated dial-wheels with fat arrows. If the arrow lands on the picture of a dog, a speaker says "The dog goes Bark bark, bark bark!" Or if it lands on a cow, "The cow goes Mooooooo!"

Nevermind. :/

littlewing
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15 posted 2003-08-28 06:38 PM


yes, my son has one, I keep it well hidden . . .
brian sites
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16 posted 2003-08-28 11:29 PM


yes

I second what Sue said

when you are twenty

you will take our reading eyes

and make them bleed

wow

Wind
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17 posted 2003-08-29 08:56 AM


see...now I know what you were saying...I was talking about the little red hen. you know..she askes her animal friends for help making bread and then they don't help her so she eats it all herself you know..oh thse toys used to facinate me...I used to pretend I was a DJ and scramble it up. The rooster goes gguuguggguguru

insanity is not a crime

bsquirrel
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18 posted 2003-08-29 12:09 PM


I used to take hold of the arrow and make it go really slow or really fast.
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