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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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I will kiss the snow from your lips. I will bring your face to a blush. Will you open your subtle eyes, so I may see them in the light? I will move the stones from your keep. I will stack them over the hill. I will lay them within the copse, its gray-green shades with theirs interspersed. I will free you from the dark clay, uncover your form and brush off the soil. Dim curling clouds will filter the light as I comb the luster back to your hair. I will hold you closer than wait. I will hold you closer than warmth. As the dawn begins to build, I will listen for your first breath. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gah, this is beautiful. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Much thanks. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Mikey . . . your words alone could most certainly bring the dead to life . . . *smile* xxoo |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
this is amazing. sometimes you are so good and I am guilty of not knowing anything origonal to say. so sorry. I don't even tell you when I put your stuff in my library but I do a lot insanity is not a crime [This message has been edited by Wind (08-26-2003 05:46 PM).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Loved this, Mikey... *smiles* ~Tiers |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Soothing.. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
uncover your form and brush off the soil perfect. natural and so peaceful. thanks for the escape.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 I want this you speak of...does it exist?? even if it were a dream..I'd still be in heaven...yes soothing...I'm choking up here...If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
This (literally) brought tears to my eyes. It's so beautiful. So beautiful. The only question is... does it exist? Do people like this exist? I know we all hope and dream they do, and we search for them, but do they? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You tell me. See what I'll be up to on Saturday: www.bubastis.com/funeral |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
how should i know? |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
sorry I had to read this again...just torturing myself *sigh* this time it goes into my library forgot lasttime..doh! I was borne a blonde  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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