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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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It is obvious the most tame of things can keep you from me Forgive me If I tear down every song you gave me Rebuild them as ~mine~ They never let me go . . . . Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"Forgive me If I tear down every song you gave me Rebuild them as ~mine~" Amazing, Gem. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Wiiild horses..couldn't drag me awaay. You always remind me of some song. An I end up singing or something. heh. I l*ve it times a thousand. and one. REALLY REALLY. insanity is not a crime |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Oh, this: "It is obvious the most tame of things can keep you from me" Yes, yes, yes - I have thought this exactly once, it's amazing to see it in a poem. What a clearly unique and purely real statement. "They never let me go" No, they don't - do they. This is a great write, I enjoyed it immensely.  Nicole |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thankyouyou little sweethearts. He once said that when he listened to wild horses, it reminded him of me. It was a song we both shared a love of. It is sucha powerful song full of emotion, and I didn't want it to be forever reminding me of how he was dragged away so easily. well, he walked away. Its so difficult, and I have so many songs I need to unnattach memories of him from, theyre just too good to never be able to listen to them again! Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Why bother asking for his forgiveness? (I know, I did too) just do it *big hugs* good to see you again GemThere's nothing like a good fight with a horse to put your problems into perspective |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Another wonderful poem. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
for a very long time, gem, I could'nt listen to a lot of music, sometimes still cant . . . but one day you will look at these things with new light . . . and yes, much too good of a tune to not listen to. beautiful writing, as always check your mail . . . was tinkering around *smile* xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Rebuild them as ~mine~ great thought I had to do the same with quite a few songs in my life |
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