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Riley![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain ![]() |
that had electricity in their eyes never seemed to real for me yet to fake to stop believing in love pain was the kiss I felt it left a glow forever as the world darkened around my face leaving you to stand for me not a choice but more a sign for now from everything but you * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
I got a bit lost in the poem here and there, bt in the end, it's clearly shown how much you love this person, or, at least, need to. Nice write. ~Titus ![]() The few. The proud. The Marines. |
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Riley![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Titus, thank you so much for replying..and its more like needing him to. love, riley * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Reminds me of the Cure. That's a compliment. ![]() |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Black hugs.. electrical.. My mind is frazzled by this, I love it. |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
course I know what shes talking about ![]() insanity is not a crime |
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Riley![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
BSquirrel- thank you so much for that ![]() Kaoru-glad you enjoyed so much.... ![]() Windy- Liz i am insane evil and very roadkill pretty. yep...i am dark that who i only ever will be and maybe someday...i'll know what i am doing * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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