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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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a beckoning-- so I surmised come hither with one wink of eye the chance to dance with love again awakening was just the end of the sin that held my hope the sun aloft a glimpse of smoke notice of the death of pope; now, my heart's dear vatican yearns to sleep - to dream again. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and when it awakens. . . wonderful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this very much! Written well.  |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nicely written poem here! I liked this a lot  Very wonderful.--Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Very nice job Serenity. This is simply outstanding, I love how it is put together. The fragmented sense of the format adds to the actual emotion in it. Good job! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i really liked.. the way u have written this poem! jus awesome... keep writing   ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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