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to dream again

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-04-15 01:51 PM

a beckoning--
so I surmised
come hither
with one wink of eye
the chance to dance
with love again
awakening
was just the end
of the sin
that held my hope
the sun aloft
a glimpse of smoke
notice of
the death of pope;
now, my heart's dear vatican
yearns to sleep - to dream again.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-04-15 02:21 PM

and when it awakens. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-16 12:31 PM

I enjoyed this very much! Written well.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-17 12:34 PM

Nicely written poem here! I liked this a lot

Very wonderful.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-04-21 03:12 PM

Very nice job Serenity. This is simply outstanding, I love how it is put together. The fragmented sense of the format adds to the actual emotion in it.
Good job!
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-04-26 07:58 PM

i really liked..
the way u have written this poem!
jus awesome...
keep writing

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

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