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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2003-07-30 06:01 AM


my dear friend,
please don’t lose heart
for yours is a Mother’s
and I know you grieve
for grieve a Mother must
when her son bids farewell
and goes to some lands far away
far far away

but my friend,
I know for sure that your love
for your son won’t fade away
can’t ever fade away
since fading is only
for light and shadows
and your heart shines
even when you tread in
murky shadows
for yours is a Mother’s
and I know you grieve

hope there is a way
that I could help
in relieving grief
and helping tears flow
for once as smoothly as they must
so what are then left
are forever memories

the only way I can think of is
saving a few thoughts
in certain boxes
that remain like photographs
framed in memory cells
and hope these times pass on
as quick as they could

Take Care…

---------

just wrote this for a friend who lost her son in a tragic road accident...

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (07-30-2003 07:19 AM).]

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2003-07-30 07:17 AM


but my friend,
I know for sure that your love
for your son won’t fade away
can’t ever fade away
since fading is only
for light and shadows
and your heart shines
============================

beautiful sentiments for a friend in pain Sud, she's lucky to have you in her time of loss. Good to see you here kind poet sir.

"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

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2 posted 2003-07-30 05:39 PM


Your friend is lucky to have you there for her at such an awful time, I'm sure she will appreciate your beautiful writing

Andy

Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2003-08-01 07:02 AM


Thanks a lot Janet and Andy...

regards,
sudhir

LoveBug
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4 posted 2003-08-04 07:57 PM


What a touching and beautiful way to offer comfort to your friend. I enjoyed this a lot and I hope that your friend drew strength from this piece and from your love and friendship.

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-08-05 10:09 AM


the only way I can think of is
saving a few thoughts
in certain boxes
that remain like photographs
framed in memory cells
and hope these times pass on
as quick as they could

~*~

As time goes by, Sudhir,
this poem will grow even more precious
that you took a moment
to commemorate a life
everlasting...

Bless you.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
6 posted 2003-08-06 07:34 AM


Thank you muchly, my good friends...

Regards
Sudhir

Local Parasite
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7 posted 2003-08-08 02:33 PM


Poetry is a kind and thoughtful way to ease the heart.  You wrote well, Sudhir, and I commend you on this piece of art, as well as your choice of expression.  Well done, my friend...

Parasite

Faith is a fine invention
When gentlemen can see
But microscopes are prudent
In an emergency.
~~~Emily Dickinson

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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8 posted 2003-08-08 07:16 PM


Beautiful Sudhir . . .
you are a great friend indeed
xxoo

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
9 posted 2003-08-11 07:19 AM


Thanks a lot LP and Sue...

Regards
Sudhir

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