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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
my dear friend, please don’t lose heart for yours is a Mother’s and I know you grieve for grieve a Mother must when her son bids farewell and goes to some lands far away far far away but my friend, I know for sure that your love for your son won’t fade away can’t ever fade away since fading is only for light and shadows and your heart shines even when you tread in murky shadows for yours is a Mother’s and I know you grieve hope there is a way that I could help in relieving grief and helping tears flow for once as smoothly as they must so what are then left are forever memories the only way I can think of is saving a few thoughts in certain boxes that remain like photographs framed in memory cells and hope these times pass on as quick as they could Take Care… --------- just wrote this for a friend who lost her son in a tragic road accident... [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (07-30-2003 07:19 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
but my friend, I know for sure that your love for your son won’t fade away can’t ever fade away since fading is only for light and shadows and your heart shines ============================ beautiful sentiments for a friend in pain Sud, she's lucky to have you in her time of loss. Good to see you here kind poet sir. "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Your friend is lucky to have you there for her at such an awful time, I'm sure she will appreciate your beautiful writing Andy |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot Janet and Andy... regards, sudhir |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
What a touching and beautiful way to offer comfort to your friend. I enjoyed this a lot and I hope that your friend drew strength from this piece and from your love and friendship. Oh, make me Thine forever |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
the only way I can think of is saving a few thoughts in certain boxes that remain like photographs framed in memory cells and hope these times pass on as quick as they could ~*~ As time goes by, Sudhir, this poem will grow even more precious that you took a moment to commemorate a life everlasting... Bless you. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you muchly, my good friends... Regards Sudhir |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Poetry is a kind and thoughtful way to ease the heart. You wrote well, Sudhir, and I commend you on this piece of art, as well as your choice of expression. Well done, my friend... Parasite Faith is a fine invention |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful Sudhir . . . you are a great friend indeed xxoo |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot LP and Sue... Regards Sudhir |
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