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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You Don’t You may think you know the truth You don’t So why throw your barbs this way Why don’t you just speak your mind You don’t Need to hide what you want say I’m tired of playing this silly game You don’t Know the story my friend Stop trying to put the blame on me You don’t Have the story, beginning to end. [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (06-23-2003 10:35 PM).] |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
You don't need to take any of this....rock on!  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
EXACTLY! Amen to that xxoo |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
You may think you know the truth You don’t lol.. Ms Devine... those who protest the loudest that they know the truth are so often the ones who haven't a clue... |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Interesting, Poet of the Vine... not my favourite of yours but still cute, and I like the way you worked the "you don't" into the context of each stanza... was nice. A simple concept and a simple poem but no less a poem... well done. Parasite Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Nice little poem. I like your style of reminding all of us to think and "know the story" before we open our mouths to throw stones at people. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
I really enjoyed this one Sharon...I feel this way many times! Very much enjoyed  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
First of all, I sort of "un-clutter" myself with blamers, as who cares whose fault it was anyway, just fix it right? Great message in this one, and I sure hope it hits its mark as it hit the target  Good one Miss deVine. |
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