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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Collected Recall I watch, another day goes by and rains continue on. The moldiness keeps creeping in, no sunrise in the dawn. The dampness wrinkles thoughts I wear, irregulars become. My stomach turns in knots forsaking more the same to numb. I'm missing all the warmth of once, the longing, driven feel. The moonlit nights of self-return from sonnets in the real. I praise the moments softness held, the clearings of the mist. And all the whiles of innocense in loving, reminisced. I seek the shelter from without, within, when storm's died down, collecting recall, ribbon placed in rainbow colors, bound. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The moonlit nights of self-return from sonnets in the real. I praise the moments softness held, the clearings of the mist. And all the whiles of innocense in loving, reminisced. I seek the shelter from without, within, when storm's died down, collecting recall, ribbon placed in rainbow colors, bound. ================================= beautiful bittersweet write Poetess M, such lovely poetic phrasing and images. I seek the shelter from without, within love the word play and alliteration of that line. The moonlit nights of self-return from sonnets in the real. what a lovely couplet that is. Beautiful. No matter what the differences No matter what the cost When words become our weapons ... All that's beautiful is lost. DeVante' [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (06-20-2003 10:30 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I believe the rain here is getting to me..I have been having such soggy thoughts of late... Thank you Janet hugs M |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
We had some heavy rain a couple of days ago. Ruined my night out with a few girl friends. And I did neglect to bring my jacket due to the hot weather. Rain can really be a pest, but at the same time, it's so tragically romantic... And yes, I love the conclusion of this one. Soon as the rain stops there's always a rainbow in its wake, so in the meantime just take shelter wherever you happen to be... Very nice writing, M... Parasite Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A few girlfriends huh? And all I want is one (man...that is) The rain has lifted yesterday and today and we have a few more days of reprieve before the thunderstorms begin by week's end. And here I am stuck in here, cleaning with a break here and there ... M maybe I will go out into the sun and weed sounds like a plan to me *s thanks, LP [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (06-24-2003 10:51 AM).] |
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