Loving Each Day (Repost- First Acrostic)

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LoveBug

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0 posted 2001-02-01 10:22 PM

Not the best thing to grace the pages of the Poetic Haven, but I had to make some kind of contribution on this historic day!

Longing for the sun to rise
Over the soft green hills
Views stir and that touch my soul
I still look and get chills
Nothing ever could make me
Give up this glorious day I see

Each day is a gift from God
Veiled by sorrow, but beautiful still
Every day I rise
Ringing tears from my eyes
Yonder daylight… I long to feel

Dawn will come to us each day
And each morn, with gratefulness I pray
Yearning to feel all days to come

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav

Poet deVine

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1 posted 2001-02-01 10:49 PM

And you've chosen beautiful sentiments to post first here. Love this Erica.

Elizabeth

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2 posted 2001-02-01 11:07 PM

I love it! I have yet to master an acrostic, so my hat is off to you.

Elizabeth

Martie

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3 posted 2001-02-02 12:12 PM

Erica--Each day is a new beginning...this is a beautiful poem..and well done acrostic.

Dopey Dope

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4 posted 2001-02-03 11:37 AM

*german accent* very interesting......
hehe I liked this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

CocoBaci
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5 posted 2001-02-04 12:27 PM

Lovebug,
Your acrostic is beautiful...
A smooth read with gentleness of expression...
I enjoyed
~coco~

You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win...

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 02-04-2001).]

Acies

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6 posted 2001-02-06 07:01 PM

This doesn't read like a first try at all. You did really good on this one. Maybe I should try this style one of these days too

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Allan Riverwood

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7 posted 2001-04-22 10:51 AM

Awesome job, Erica! I really like this one loads! You rock girl!

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

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