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Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2003-05-19 09:00 PM

You are the words in my sonnet
Your heart breathes life into my rhyme
The beating of your heart is
The rhythm I use to keep time

Your smile lights up each quatrain
Tenderness is the theme you inspire
You are the words in my sonnet
You are the melody of my love’s choir

Metronome’s beat with coursing blood
My heart feels each second floating by
You are the words, the soul of my song
You are my reason why

Your touch is my symphony
Your kiss my tempest tossed
You are the words in my poetry
Without you I am lost

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

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1 posted 2003-05-19 10:07 PM

yes.

and all I can do is smile...
(that's a GOOD thing!)

lovely, delicate, and graceful write.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

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2 posted 2003-05-19 10:13 PM

'Your touch is my symphony
Your kiss my tempest tossed
You are the words in my poetry
Without you I am lost'

Knew someone like that once.

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2003-05-19 10:59 PM

I'm taking applications to fill the position.

Cpat Hair

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4 posted 2003-05-20 08:57 AM

very nicely done Ms Devine...

Nan

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2003-05-20 09:48 AM

Very fine indeed... and I'll be on the lookout for ya...

JP
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

6 posted 2003-05-20 10:34 AM

Well crafted Miss. Well crafted indeed!

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

7 posted 2003-05-20 11:51 AM

Ahh... very intriguing... I know how it is to have a nice muse like this. I just recently got a new one myself that's been pushing the rhymes out of me rapid-fire...

So nice to read from you again, Sharon... a lovely poem, very light reading, for somewhat heavy subject matter. Nice combo...

Parasite

Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world.
~Percy Bysshe Shelley

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2003-05-20 12:27 PM

mind if I borrow this???

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2003-05-20 02:28 PM

You are the words in my sonnet
Your heart breathes life into my rhyme
The beating of your heart is
The rhythm I use to keep time

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well this is a moth sigh waiting to happen

I love the theme and poetic play in this.
Poetry in motion...rhymes from the heart...
very lovely poetess Sharon

I refuse to accept that mankind is so tragically bound to the starless midnight of racism & war that the daybreak of peace can never be reality.
MLK

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2003-05-20 02:44 PM

PoetdeVine~
Very, very nice read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

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Ontario, Canada

11 posted 2003-05-20 04:00 PM

I believe you should be flooded with applications after this piece Sharon.

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....

12 posted 2003-05-22 10:03 PM

I love this, I so exactly feel like that about this guy....except we havent kissed yet. But yeah lovely poem n lovely feelings n all nice n I better shut up now....

Nice to read you again, Sharon.
Luv, Liz xx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

sea_of_okc
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since 1999-06-15

Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

13 posted 2003-05-23 02:27 PM

Well I would request one of them there applications (clearing throat) but I am not sure I can take the desert heat... or the heat of your passion for that matter

Absolutely beautiful piece deVine one.

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