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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
That's the room where you were conceived It's where your mother and I believed we'd live to be at least a hundred together as one forever embracing Our bodies entwined our minds deceived we tasted love and openly received the fruits of joy the sighs of passion together we three became. That's the room where we grew old It's where your mother and I lost hold of the joy and bliss of love in life together as flame and fuel burning Our dreams destroyed our hearts now cold we gag at love and point and scold eachother casting blame and guilt together we three survive. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
yeah, I feel this one... Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I feel it too... I see my parents falling out of love more and more as their problems drive them apart from one another. They've lost that forgiveness, that mutual understanding that love creates... assuming it was ever there... It's a sad thing to see. And you're right... the child will always himself be a living reminder of what once was, of that closeness and intimacy that once existed. Well written, Frac.  Parasite God becomes as |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
LP: Thanks for the reply. Seems my attempt at pulling off dystopia on a personal level was successful. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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