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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Amazing Grace.... In dark of night I sing for you My voice lifts up in song! Alone am I in this cold world Where right is now all wrong You took my heart and crushed it here Beneath your heel of scorn No longer can I bear a pain I’ve known since the time I was born So now I retreat within my shell Let those who shine prevail I take my leave of heart’s desire And thus will end my tale. ** Ok..your turn!! Pick a song and write lyrics for it.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh-o-lady bright! I weep your tears that dripped..down on me -eeeeee... I... never guessed how still the flame would shine down on me.... (This does work. If ya call me? I'll sing it to ya.  ) |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
A lot of poems can be sung to the tune of Amazing Grace... because Amazing Grace is simply ballad format...  I do like the way this is written, Sharon... the formatting is nice, and the tune of the song is a nice enhancement... but I'll pass on your offer to write new lyrics to a song that already has them, as I used to do that as a habit and have recently overcome it, for what I think is an improvement in my poetry overall... If you write well to the tune of a song then, I suppose it's a good exercise nonetheless... and I did enjoy this poem. Nicely done, PDV. Parasite God becomes as |
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