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Safe Haven or The Youthful Rebellious Ideal |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Why did you leave? This is our support group a few old boxes to sit on guys that care and help Dad hates me Mom can't do nothing The air's heavy with swearing and smoky tear-filled love here on the streets Let's try and be together we'll make our own heaven you and I Sounds familiar Dad said once We arc across the city, driving her nuts in our safe haven from the serious. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 --Smit My Creations [This message has been edited by fractal007 (03-31-2003 01:14 AM).] |
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Local Parasite![]()
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
That's how it is... love isn't always hallmark cards, it can be something more complex than that, like a room full of cigarette smoke and profanity being tossed about... I've never felt that kind of love, but you write it well, whatever it is... ![]() Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I've been trying to think what I can possibly say about this peice for days, but everything I think of seems a little too bland, I don't know why but I felt that I had to say something more than "wonderful writing" but it is and I enjoyed reading it and it has fascinated me everytime I have read it. Thank you for sharing this with us ![]() |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
I'm begining to get into you... give me time and I will get there, I like the journey though... Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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