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Sunday Softening...........................#3
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Sunday Softening...........................#3 |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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The sun patterns the wall to lace and weaves crystal into the morning we lie heaped under blankets listening to the lazy minutes marveling each other In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Hey this reminds me of when I wake up in the morning, only when I wake up I'm not usually in such a beautifully serene mood that you portray here...  I have several ash remains of potted plants that I keep around my room as proof of that...um...heh-heh...  Beautiful poem!!!  Little Spyro T. Dragon Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ah Martie I love this! There's something about that sun streaming through the windows and hitting the wall. So cheery!  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The lazy minutes.....ah yes.....what a refreshing poem. Nicely done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Martie~ This is poignant, thoughtful, and truly beautiful. I loved the image this painted in my mind...so peaceful...wonderful work my friend, as always!  *Krista Knutson* "Can't run fast enough Can't hide I can't fly I'm struggling with the limits of this ordinary life..." ~Tracy Chapman |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Wondeful! Quick to read, and it created a marvelous image. Try to put it into Tanka. That might be neat to see. Either way, a marvelous post. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie...another pleasure treasure! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A beautiful poem Martie hugs2uPoetFriend coco |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Martie, I loved this the first time I read it and the second reading just reaffirms that. Thanks for sharing this. Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you all for such wonderful replies to this poem. |
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