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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Catch Soiled ball falls from hand, strikes the earth. Bounces three quarters back to waiting, open hand. ~~~~~~~~  [This message has been edited by Tramp Poet (03-08-2003 09:10 AM).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
yep...simple pleasures.  |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Cool little poem that gets the imagination going. This could be event could be a part of so many different things in life. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
thanks for the reads and comments... probably the simpilist, shortes thing i've ever written (other than unfinished fragments) thanks again... "If you give a man a fire, he's warm for a night; if you set a man on fire, he's warm for the rest of his life." |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I really like the simplicity of this poem, great stuff  |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Quite simple, yes. It's a law that applies to more than just a bouncing ball. I like your description of the ball as "soiled." One of those tiny details that specifies a metaphor so precisely that I might almost be able to decipher your personal meaning for the poem, if I knew you a little more than I do. Thanks for the thoughts. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Nice little read, simple ( go figure ) Riley Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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