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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-02-07 01:44 PM



I kissed the mist
that carried the soul
of a heart so true
up into the blue…
and when I saw
bright sun shine through,
I kissed the mist,
said goodbye
to you.

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-07 03:11 PM


Like seeing the sun reflecting off a skyscraper -- beautiful on the surface; damaging underneath.
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2 posted 2003-02-07 03:34 PM


yes, both sides of the love coin, reflections of reality

hugs to you, have a great visit with your sweetheart!

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3 posted 2003-02-07 06:17 PM


An impressive comparison between a beautiful meteorological process and the human experience of death.  I'll be storing this in my library.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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4 posted 2003-02-07 09:19 PM


Hello again. Thanks for that reply! How are things up in your neck of the woods?
Wishing you peace and safety, Kacy.

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5 posted 2003-02-07 11:27 PM


Kacy,
You sure it wasn't the mister? Okay, now I'll go read this.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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6 posted 2003-02-08 06:35 PM


LOL, Larry. I've no mister...not the two legged kind, not the little spray bottle for misting plants, either.
Yep, go read.
Need a mister for AZ yet?
Looks like AZ and CO will both be on drought alert this year. there's hardly any snow pack in the Rockies.

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7 posted 2003-02-10 10:57 AM


I very much like the flow of this.  The theme is simple, but important and you communicated it in a very simple way, which is very appropriate...

I like the image, and the clever sound of this.  Quite a treat to the ear.     Thanks for contributing to Sanctuary.

Parasite

"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

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8 posted 2003-02-10 11:38 AM


Thank you Sir Parasite! You no doubt enjoy a symbiotic relationship with many poets here.
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9 posted 2004-04-09 07:19 PM


A keeper.
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10 posted 2004-04-09 09:06 PM


Gemma? I forgot about this write, thanks for refreshing it, as I liked this one myself, written as a gift for a friend.
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