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I kissed the mist |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I kissed the mist that carried the soul of a heart so true up into the blue… and when I saw bright sun shine through, I kissed the mist, said goodbye to you. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Like seeing the sun reflecting off a skyscraper -- beautiful on the surface; damaging underneath. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yes, both sides of the love coin, reflections of reality hugs to you, have a great visit with your sweetheart! |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
An impressive comparison between a beautiful meteorological process and the human experience of death. I'll be storing this in my library. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hello again. Thanks for that reply! How are things up in your neck of the woods? Wishing you peace and safety, Kacy. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, You sure it wasn't the mister? Okay, now I'll go read this. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, Larry. I've no mister...not the two legged kind, not the little spray bottle for misting plants, either. Yep, go read. Need a mister for AZ yet? Looks like AZ and CO will both be on drought alert this year. there's hardly any snow pack in the Rockies. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I very much like the flow of this. The theme is simple, but important and you communicated it in a very simple way, which is very appropriate... I like the image, and the clever sound of this. Quite a treat to the ear. Thanks for contributing to Sanctuary. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you Sir Parasite! You no doubt enjoy a symbiotic relationship with many poets here. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
A keeper. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Gemma? I forgot about this write, thanks for refreshing it, as I liked this one myself, written as a gift for a friend. |
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