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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2003-01-15 05:59 PM


Wow... what a stinker. Delete thread, please.

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2003-01-16 11:53 AM


Hm, I noticed that the thread is still here, so let's try the poem again!

Revision's nightmare

Where the dog bit in play
keeps my hand at rest.

Cannot seem to strike
a word so plain as pain.

A slow red eye
that doesn't want to close.

This skin needs some time
to sleep and recompose.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (01-16-2003 11:54 AM).]

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2 posted 2003-01-17 02:18 PM


Hah, I know it... revisions are a nightmare... don't you just hate it, when you can't quite seem to capture the word... I've lost some sleep over that one, for sure.  

"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2003-01-17 02:35 PM


Don't I know it, LP? This one's inspired by an injury I incurred while playin' with the dog. Ouch, my hand!
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