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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

0 posted 2001-02-13 02:13 PM

I feel threads between the spaces
you can’t see them but they’re there.
They join together places
of your life that need repair.

They hold the beads together
when they're falling, falling free.
and string the rainy weather
in a peace and harmony.

Now, I could call them prisms
for their sheen reflects a smile;
and we're touched with newer visions
when they tarry for awhile.

Pray for showers in your wilderness
exhilarating streams;
They will bring a sense of wholeness
to our separated dreams.

When you feel these threads or prisms, should you call them by that name,
just stand and know that they will warm you in the falling rain.

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

[This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 02-13-2001).]

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2001-02-13 06:09 PM

Kathleen~

Just beautiful! I loved this and will be back when I think of a 'real' reply, but just know that I think this is great.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-02-13 06:16 PM

Elizabeth, there is nothing wrong with your reply, It feels good to have the feedback, it's dry here in my heart! Thank you.

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2001-02-14 10:09 AM

Excellent poem! I loved the rhythm and the theme.

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-02-15 02:20 PM

Me gusto mucho!!!
You write very well!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-02-15 03:06 PM

Sharon, thank you!

Dopey Dope: eso es muy agradable de usted decir a señor

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-02-15 09:30 PM

This was fabulous. The images are inspiring to me. Very well done.

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