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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods 
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(~rolling eyes~ alas, no one allows direct linking... please follow the link to see the corresponding photo; you can find it here, under 'death': particle tarot ) dave mckean piercing, clear, subtle color to black stroke of a dandelion wisp chalk-sooted the needle’s phallic thrust to lazuline tangles tap the knuckle to their silent frenzy that stain one xanthic cylinder: tube of spongy string and grease plaited nerve & sinew over spindle spike of mineral tenderly compressed in the corset husk of oil and hair how skin puckers shocking the bead of blood the ripe pain underlining thought blank mind and peel it slices through every metaphorical skin the cervix soul our arms held in our arms womb in womb panting of symbiosis the dreamline the rough awakening death’s breath inseminates my mouth birthing dust to my tongue like maggots teeth rotting and along my skin the fluttering lines of moths i am shuttering reborn outside to in wings to my wrist like angels stitched to the seamless skin the paper membranes torn in terror blind how they circle, clinging paraplegic thorax hemorrhaging & broken this child ungiven the dry ribs of moral coil fetal curl and decay and my life expendable a cycle broken, choice and rest. to gore the soft canvas, thread white to black the gentle infinity: scarred [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Cor (10-16-2002 01:56 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey you--- didn't we just go to sleep?  curious as to the evolution of your revolution--you made some interesting choices here...hmmm...tell ya what? lemme grab some coffee and munch this in my mind a bit... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh...and soft canvas--where ever didja come up with that?  |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
~grin~ lookin' and, yep... heads up to ya'll a few phrases are stolen from a chat with ms. s'en... K? that other poem you were a waiting for is kinda the inverse to this... check it out.  psst. did the picture work for you? for whatever reason, if i select properties, and go to the link directly it loads, but otherwise, just sits there, little devil x just a grinnin' ... go figure. [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Cor (10-15-2002 10:18 AM).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Geocities doesn't allow you to link to them..that's why the pic won't show... |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
thanks for the heads up sharon!... okay, got 'nother domain just for peekshures... hahahahaha! death to geocities! [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Cor (10-15-2002 10:42 AM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Death to Pixies! Life to "Megs" work! Sexy and sullen at once, a cycle with broken spokes. Reading the words, thrillingly. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
probably shouldn't, but... wow. the other is ok. this one... way up there, perhaps at the top. i LOVE this one. this is real. |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
~smile~ thank you all.  to s'en for her constant inspiration, who has caused me to 'create' lately when i thought all wells were dry (so much more to thank you for, hon, but let's start there ~smile~)*snort* death to pixies? whaddaya have against pixies, mikey? ...and: "Sexy and sullen at once, a cycle with broken spokes." that's almost a personals ad blurb for me rotfl... ~grin~ thanks to my biggest fan (just promise if i get caught in a blizzard with ya that you wont cut my feet off, k?)and C? i shouldn't... but: you know the way some people always have to prove themselves to a particular parent before they're completely satisfied with a creation? ...well, the last little comment from you is what always gives me the true merit of my work. ~smile~ thanks. |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
i was thinking abou thtis the other day, which is what brought me in here. better than i recall, but also lonelier. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Your profile says you've originated 70 posts....I'd hoped for more. I may not respond to the old ones and suddenly thunder the lists with your work, but I intend to read every single one. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
If you can read this--drop me a line. You are missed. |
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