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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-10-07 02:57 PM

we
  connect
    (triapse)
       through angles of sunlight,

a smile
                               unfinished;
                 confirmed.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (10-07-2002 03:00 PM).]

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

1 posted 2002-10-07 03:02 PM

there!
a proper
spot
for this
quietness

thanks, dude

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-10-07 03:06 PM

Thank you, Brian.
(and Serenity)

Squirl

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-10-07 11:46 PM

You're into short works lately Mikey...I really love the sparseness of these.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-10-08 11:49 AM

Thanks, Sharon. Some poems just don't need as much space as others.

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

5 posted 2002-10-08 03:25 PM

Yr brave, Mr. Poem-Hider.

I haven't dared do a spaced poem since Sweat and a Shotgun; my one and only, and I don't think I could ever make it work again.

You make everything work.

I love you, silly baby.

your tongue's like poison
so swollen it fills up my mouth

rs

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-10-08 03:44 PM

Baby...guess what?

I love you.

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

7 posted 2002-10-08 04:14 PM

You answered 'fore I could guess!!

your tongue's like poison
so swollen it fills up my mouth

rs

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-10-08 04:26 PM

Okay ...

now you're REALLY cute!

Sea-Tossed Squirrely Boy

yrs

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

9 posted 2002-10-08 04:30 PM

I'm going to ignore you and initiate this the proper way.

Ahem.

*kiss*

Guess what?

your tongue's like poison
so swollen it fills up my mouth

rs

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2002-10-08 04:55 PM

*kiss back* Wha'?

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

11 posted 2002-10-08 04:56 PM

I love you.

See, that's how it's done!

your tongue's like poison
so swollen it fills up my mouth

rs

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

12 posted 2002-10-08 05:02 PM

You steal from the best.

I love you. Guess what?

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

13 posted 2002-10-08 05:11 PM

Wha', lovely?

your tongue's like poison
so swollen it fills up my mouth

rs

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

14 posted 2002-10-08 05:20 PM

*kiss* I love you. And, also, we're such the cute couple that we're probably making people reading this physically nauseous.

Cool!

I love you, baby.

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

15 posted 2002-10-08 05:22 PM

*kiss back*

Wow! Making people physically nauseous is fun!

Love you too, hon. Immensely much so.

your tongue's like poison
so swollen it fills up my mouth

rs

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

16 posted 2002-10-08 05:28 PM

Sheesh, right at this moment, Bach's Air on a G string just started playing.

Romantic music for a romantic grrl.

Immer...

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

17 posted 2002-10-10 10:46 AM

This is such a great write, I really enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing

Andrew

ps- eww get a room

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

18 posted 2002-10-10 06:51 PM

Andrew, thank you.
And we need more than one.

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