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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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A world of inspiration With happenings all around Why is it then it's left me Not a grain of it be found? It's ever so allusive It just seems to flee from me My thoughts are just plain void of Life's creativity The passion still does surface Leaves a burning in my mind Then a gentle wind blows through And my thoughts are unrefined I've been so uninspired I just cannot seem to write All those thoughts that enter in Once again seem to take flight I need some inspiration Need a mind that's clear and free I sit in desperation And I'm bended on one knee BEGGING FOR INSPIRATION! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I know how this goes. I can't seem to write more than one poem every few months. It sucks. If ya want a challenge, then write a poem using the line from your signature-"I don't question YOUR existance-God." |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
I think we have all been here before, me almost all the time. I loved the poem. One thing about the title though, "where for" is not actualy a question of where, its a question of why, just thought you might like to know. Anyway, great writing. Keith every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Love this one WhtDove. . . and I think that you might have found it!!  ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
No inspiration? Void of creativity? If that's where this neat write came from, I wouldn't worry about it, LOL! Great stuff! Lary |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Sure can relate to this one Becky!!!! But, from the looks of it, it's baaaaaaaccccckkkkk. This is great.... Bonnie |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
no inspiration....oh my if this isn't inspiration, how do you call it than? wonderful write. Charisma |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Angel, may I join you? I know exactly what you're going through! sigh, the joys. great piece hon Maree  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Wonderfully done...enjoyed very much.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Elizabeth, I think the last one I wrote was around November. It seems like forever ago. Thanks, I will take that into consideration and see if anything comes out of it. Keith, thanks! Actually I didn't know that, so I learned something new. I write very rarely, though I'd like to write a lot more than that. LOL Charisma I'm not sure. Just trying to see if I could write about no inspiration. LOL It's been a long time. Thanks Angel anytime!! Thanks girl Victoria I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading! Sven thank you! Though I don't think it's back. It's been driving me nuts to write something, so I sat down and did this. But as for that inspiration, I don't think it's back yet. The brain is still blank and void. LOL Lary. I thank you much! We'll see Bonnie! LOL I certainly know the inspiration for the inspirational is not here.  |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
LOL...I think you've been peeking inside my head, Rebecca!! Cute poem! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'd give you some suggestions but...I'm not inspired enough! been there....doing that |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lately, the daily grind has ground down the fine edge of inspiration...I'm tired. And can't think...YOU did great with this..you were inspired!! LOL |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Denise, seems more than a few are like us, uninspired. LOL Deer, I know. I had you in mind as well when I wrote this. Knowing how inspired we both have been. If I can do it, so can you. Write about how uninspired you are. ~Thanks~Sharon the grind does that. I hope things get better soon, I know it sucks. As for inspired though? No, just forced myself to do something. Tank ya |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
And she creates an inspiring poem from lack of inspiration! How does she do that!? Very well put Liz |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done, i think you found it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Hey, I just woke up from an eight month sleep. I think you're inspired and don't know it. Where'd this wonderful poem come from? Gene (formerly, u_gene) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, yes been this way for quite some time, even thought about not writing poetry anymore, but I can't seem to breathe without it....this is wonderful, wonderful.. "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL Liz! Thank you, I wish I could do it again and again and again. DD I wish. Maybe I just need to sit down and force myself to write again. Thanks. Gene, I think I've been asleep for longer than that LOL...I'm not really sure where this came. I think forceably, and irritation that I haven't been able to write anything for a while. But then again, I never wrote very much. One of those, I write one, and not again for a long time. Sometimes, if I'm lucky I might get 2 in one day, or maybe even 2 in one month. Just never often. Thanks Kathleen, but it don't look like you've been uninspired. I see your poems You're doing great! |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
lovely |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I hadn't even remembered this one at all. LOL thanks for bringing it up again. I've been thinking about my hosp stay and what I can write about that. God bless |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
im glad i brought it back for you |
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