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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Summer fades into ageless hues Of autumns comforting days Pull the afghan closer, love Let’s speak of old lovers’ ways Soft hands clasped together No pressure to perform The world can go on around us Waiting for us to conform A smile of acceptance At maturity’s imperfections Time, our friend, passes on In the friendship of reflections |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
This sounds like absolute bliss, sharing such familiar things with someone close. I loved it, Sharon. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sharon, Is this new? If so, I'm glad a simple gesture can break a block and warm the heart. Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ This is just so softly done~ A lovely delicate touch~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon You made this such an intimate moment...the most wonderful kind...with just a few words you set the most tender scene. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you ... yes this is new...based on a remark in the DP forum....Old people don't have sex, they have naps! LOL |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sharon~ I remember that comment in DP and I LOVE what you've done with the inspiration from it. You've painted such a soft and contented picture. I absolutely love this.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
This is absolutely beautiful, and what I always strive for in every relationship. Very well written, PdV. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
People say that older, mature love is the best, and I absolutely agree. This has captured that confidence that comes with that love. No pressure, nobody to please, just... bliss. Wonderful work! -Erica Most of us go to our grave with our music still inside of us. |
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