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Goodknight
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0 posted 2002-06-21 09:04 PM


At first it was so great
Alone I could do what I want
Even stay up late
Then I realized
That alone was without you
I was too lonely then
Well at least I didn’t have to eat stew


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Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-06-21 09:08 PM


LOL...You are....? You are...a fast writer!!
Good stuff Paul!

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2 posted 2002-06-21 09:13 PM


LOL..ok...you can join in..you've passed the test!
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3 posted 2002-06-21 09:43 PM


That made me hungry.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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4 posted 2002-06-22 12:33 PM




BRAVO!!! Wow, it seems everyone in this forum is on fire today in posts, this is wonderfully sad but powerful! (sigh) May your love always be chicken soup to your soul, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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