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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-06-21 07:25 PM

To Never Fade...

I watch the flowers wilt and fade
as my heart has lost its beat for life.
Ever since the day I met you, the real you,
I have prayed for reign (rain)
yours to come and myst my desires
with the taste of you.
I never meant those words of gone,
of leaving you in my past, but the want,
the dreams, the taste of what I need today
are so overwhelming that
every time I see you I feel that kiss
across the eyes,
wishing them to be of forever
never to leave never fade.
Oh how I watch the flowers grow and hope
that before they wilt... you will come
and awake me in this lonely room
and together we can walk amongst them
and see them reach to us in envy of...
a love to never fade.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (06-21-2002 07:33 PM).]

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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2002-06-21 07:31 PM

Whew!! I better get started if I'm going to keep up with you!
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2002-06-21 07:32 PM

I love the fragile burn of this .... beautiful longing and resignation, almost triumphantly melancholy, if that makes sense.

I really, really liked this!

She said burn ... together.

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3 posted 2002-06-22 07:52 PM

(big huggssssssss) Oh Maureen, this is sad but so very beautiful, sweet friend, I feel such longing in here yet I also feel hope and I believe in this for you, for the flowers to grow and blossom with love to last forever! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."


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