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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-06-21 07:21 PM



By the stream we sleep again
waiting for the day of when.
Just a moment more, or two.
Waiting for the sky to blue.

Waiting for the sun to white.
Waiting for the end of night.
Trying, dear, to keep a hold.
In this wait I feel so cold.

Here with you I hope to sleep.
In the shallows, in the deep.
Just to want to be with you.
Watch the fragile, dawning blue.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-06-21 07:25 PM


Beautiful Mike...just wanted to comment on this before I get lost again, lol...maybe I should bookmark this link or something...this is a great poem!!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-06-21 07:27 PM


oh I loved this one..you did  it justice..you are really a romantic *s

hugs
M

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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2002-06-21 07:33 PM


Fragile dawning blue....very lyrical!
bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-06-21 07:36 PM


Thanks, everyone.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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5 posted 2002-06-22 07:49 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, may you always find true happiness with your love and find blue in the skies to rest on peacefully! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thak you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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