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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-06-05 11:46 PM



You see me in my morning horror
Hair wildly gone astray
I smile and primp just for you
And still? It’s here you stay.

I ask you every question
“Too fat?” “Too much?” “Too blue?”
And though you never answer
You must have these thoughts too

silently you still stare at me
So in glitz and horror I move nearer
“tell me” I whisper softly
“are you happy being a mirror?”

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-06-05 11:52 PM


this is---hmmm...it's WRY, methinks...both sad, and humorous...this is that PdV twist that I love so much...

much to think about here.

and? I love that.

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2 posted 2002-06-06 12:11 PM


funny twist o yuh
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2002-06-06 12:13 PM


Just call me Snow White's Stepmom.
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4 posted 2002-06-09 01:53 AM


Glitz and horror?! Perfect!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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5 posted 2002-06-22 08:16 PM




(giggles in delight) That's right, who's to say a mirror can decide who's the fairest one of all anyway? LOL! I like this, sweet friend, this is very clever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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