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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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The fragrance that she left gave my candles light. The fragrance that she left straightened out my roads. The fragrance that she left fed me spoon to mouth. The fragrance that she left swelled my empty throat. The fragrance that she left calendared my days. The fragrance that she left commanded thick my nights. The fragrance that she left crushed roses to the page. The fragrance that she left is all that I have left. She said burn ... together. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sigh....you're too fast for me!!!!!!!! I should have thought of repeating a line. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Remember, speed has nothing to do with quality -- as is evident with my posts tonight. LOL But ah'm enjoyin' this, ah must say. MORE PEOPLE COME OVER!!!! Sheesh. She said burn ... together. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
diggin this - went kinda the same way... the repetition worked well! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Very cool. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I thank y'. *bows* She said burn ... together. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
I love it! So this was an off the top of the head kind of splurt on the page then, huh? I like the way you think, squirrely poet.. Sounds like you guys had fun - noooo I always log on at different times! ^_^ Love, Lynne It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 It was all Sharon's fault! Okay, and some of mine. But mostly hers!She said burn ... together. |
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