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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-17 08:40 PM

I can make you come to me,
can tease you into will,
undress me with your eyes of thought
make heartbeat quicken, still.

I turn to you with silent voice,
my hazel eyes in bloom.
There is no use, you've had me caught
in never ending gloom.

I could send you pictures
that would entertain your mind.
But isn't real the better deal
to touch the tender find?

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2002-05-17 08:47 PM

Wow!! Off the top of your head is good stuff!! Like cream rising to the top...

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-05-17 08:50 PM

well if I continued more I would have had to put it in adult *s

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-05-18 12:04 PM

Please do continue....

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

4 posted 2002-05-18 12:08 PM

keep going...

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-05-18 05:35 AM

I guess I pooped out too early and missed all the fun.

*s

M

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

6 posted 2002-05-20 12:49 PM

I like it.

Well, my best friend thinks there are some things better imagined than seen or said.. I say I agree

One question. I must have missed something as I don't pop in here as often as I would like - has a challenge been offered, or something? Everyone seems to be writing 'in answer to' poems..??? Just um.. wondering.. I'm not even sure if it's the right question, hehe...

Love,
Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-05-20 06:14 AM

last week Devine left a message on Family dialogue that on Friday Nights it would be Open Mic night in the Haven and to join in after 8...sort of spontaneous writing...*s

M

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

8 posted 2002-06-01 06:24 AM

aaaahh.

Thanks

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

9 posted 2002-11-23 01:43 AM

Honestly, I think the poem itself is a bit taunting in its tone. Cutting it off like that really does "make heartbeat quicken, still."

You've managed to make this rather erotic, and you've used absolutely none of the buzz words that seem to be so popular in mild erotic poetry. Know what that means? Means you're actually good at it.

Lovely write. Thanks for entertaining my mind.

Parasite

Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored.
~Aldous Huxley

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2002-11-23 05:36 PM

I am glad I could entertain, this was fun that night..one after the other small poems to taunt and tease...
You flatter me but I will accept it

thank you LP
M

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