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Soul Mates |
Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Written by special request with a special "thank you" to Nan for editing. Soul Mates Forever and a day, our love will thrive Together we shall walk the path of life Enwrapped in pure white petals of a rose Eternal winds sing songs of sweet repose Two hearts, beating as one - one mind - one soul Our kindred spirits - love's greatest symbol As one to each we are life's symphony From dawn of time, we're - soul mates - you and me We share a gently guiding holding hand O'er trembling earth, or quagmire of quicksand We'll climb as one each mountainside too steep Supporting too when valleys are too deep We'll cry together single truest tear One from within that cleanses every fear We'll laugh the laughter of soul's harlequin Remain ourselves, yet spirits lost akin We'll show the world love's value found anew And love each other as true lovers do On solid rock of love we'll build our home As two - yet one - we'll never be alone Enchanting melody; life's symphony Soul mates we are - forever - you and me Munda |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, I really thought this was a nice poem. If only I had the inspiration (a person) to write it about. Well done on this one. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Munda--A beautiful poem about the best kind of love. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Munda~ Very nicely done. Good to see you visiting the friendship circle - ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A lovely and rare love. Well written. Joyce |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Thanks guys for your kind replies. I'll tell you though it's not my forte to write a poem for people I don't know, howeverI loved the challenge to try. (And succeed of course. ) Thank you for taking the time to read and reply. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Munda, this is a most amazing piece. Some of the imagery in this is simply breathtaking. You have awoken a creative juice in me I had long forgot about. Thanks for doing that. I did enjoy this read for the beauty and honesty it gave. Keep writing and thanks for sharing. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
My heart just dropped on the floor hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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