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0 posted 2001-07-24 05:16 PM

I cannot trust you poet site
After all you’re only bites
And if you were to go and crash
All my poems in the trash

I cannot trust you floppy disk
To save my poems is a risk
For if you melt in the heat
All my poems incomplete

I cannot trust you memo pad
If it rained you’d be glad
To smear the words I once wrote
Or maybe eaten by a goat

I cannot trust you feeble mind
All my poems you can’t find
So maybe I’ll just keep on writing
Can’t trust its good, I got bad lighting

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 07-25-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-25 01:59 AM

You simply crack me up ! !  

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~

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2 posted 2001-07-25 09:56 AM

ROTF....this is a wonderful read, Walt...

chasing rain
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3 posted 2001-07-25 12:08 PM

LOL!!! Cute and funny.   I liked how you spelled "paranoia" <--is THAT even right?


Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

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4 posted 2001-07-25 05:31 PM

Walt--I know just what you mean...funny but sort of true too.  Loved the poem!
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5 posted 2001-07-25 06:17 PM

Nicely done here! I thought this was really great walt! Awesome job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Yu Lan
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6 posted 2001-08-11 04:49 AM

heh, yep, the man of the holy YUH returns with another brilliant tickler of the funny bone.. lol.. enjoyed muchly Walt.

“One word can be magical. Imagine then, the effect of several words, together..”

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2001-08-11 11:59 AM

ROFL ... much enjoyed this Walt!  

Best wishes,

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8 posted 2001-08-11 10:21 PM

All this is so true.  I like this.  Sometimes I find a poem of mine tha I haven't seen for awhile and I don't even recognize it as my own.  Oh for a computer brain.  Joyce
Yu Lan
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9 posted 2001-08-12 07:03 AM

Oi, I replied to this yesterday! That's not fair, my comment disappeared.   Anyway, i loved this Walt.. a read deserving of a big grin  

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10 posted 2001-08-12 02:38 PM


   I like this walt You brought a chuckle to my lips


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