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Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2001-02-03 05:30 PM

Like a mountain, we began
seeking our lovers crest
Yes there were valleys too
but we rose to meet each test

Without you life was a desert
my soul was dry and forlorn
I sought a mountain stream
hoping our love would be reborn

Then we found our hearts
in the forest of despair
Lovers lost in lies
we stumbled without care

The horizon now before us
yours east, mine is west
We part our landscapes here
we’ve failed the lover’s test.

wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-02-03 07:58 PM

man sniff yuh

You know the "Never Ending Story"?
They're still telling it!

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2001-02-03 09:54 PM

Thanks Walt..here's a tissue..now BLOW! LOL

Dopey Dope

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-02-03 10:53 PM

Awwwwww this was real sad. I'm sorry. Very nice poem though!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

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4 posted 2001-02-04 12:32 PM

A touching write PDV and I thank you for the enjoyed read

You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win...

Martie

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California

5 posted 2001-02-04 12:06 PM

Sharon--very well done...and so true of many relationships...a sad fact.

Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-02-05 01:38 PM

Oh, I hate to fail....and in love? aghhhhh

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2001-02-06 08:24 PM

woman sniff...yes. and sigh...walt, can I borrow that hankie? Oh. Nevermind.

Graceful and sad...

" Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go."
T.S. Eliot

Acies

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Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-02-23 11:00 PM

This is really sad Sharon

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

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Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-02-24 12:00 PM

Failing sucks. Just no fun at all in it.

WhtDove
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Illinois

10 posted 2001-02-27 09:19 AM

Anyone have a clean hanky?

Romy
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Plantation, Florida

11 posted 2001-02-28 09:05 AM

Very sad poem, but maybe somebody else is waiting in the west...just over the horizon?

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