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Open Poetry #18

The Up Side Of Down

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-01-14 05:03 AM

The Up Side Of Down

my world
as I once knew it
was suddenly
turned around
I now view it
from a different angle
I am on the
up side of down
many surprises
I’ve yet to receive
as I slowly
unlock this riddle
thought that I stood
upon the edge
to find out it
was just the middle

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-01-14 09:17 AM

This poem knows me...and very well, indeed. Good job Helen...your growth in poetry is affecting more than your poetry...

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2002-01-14 12:29 PM

Ahh, Helen, we DO live on the side of the mountain, and you show this quite well indeed...Very nice...very gentle smile

Sunset
Member

since 2002-01-08

Posts 80

3 posted 2002-01-14 12:32 PM

Excellent, Helen, I loved this!

Have really enjoyed your writing.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-14 12:36 PM

(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet Helen, I too agree that you are growing so wonderfully with your poetry, your words are always soooooo wonderfully expressed! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, may you unlock that riddle and find many hopes and happiness high above the down! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-01-14 12:49 PM

Helen - your poetry is written with your heart. It is a gift to read and to see your thoughts...

BC

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-01-14 05:11 PM

I felt smiles in this poem...wonderful...I love it. **big hugs** the upside of down isn't such a bad place..

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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