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mauddib
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since 2002-01-12

Posts 119
melbourne australia

0 posted 2002-01-14 04:35 AM

Dreamer.

Ah to be up there.
High above the trees.
With a whisper of a breeze to drink.
To lay upon clouds,
Clouds like islands and drift.
To sail upon a sunset that never ends.
So sensual,
Like a carress.

To lose these shackles,
These lungs and legs.
To run with forever and not search for a breath.
To bathe in soul water,
Sweet music,
Warm and wet.
To feast upon laughter
never knowing regret.

The coins from a thirsty desert dreamer,
Make their way down the well.
And if I could I would catch your coins
and take them down.
To where dreams and wishes are found.
And like candy,
I'd hand them all around.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-01-14 09:09 AM

Greg, another welcome to Passions. My only nit in your writing would be to check your spelling errors...misspelled words seem to trip up a reader's concentration...

otherwise, I like your punch and zest, so keep that going...I think I'm going to enjoy reading you...

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2002-01-14 11:34 AM

Ah...this sounds like something suited to me. I enjoyed this..it flows quite nicely (only one misspelled word that I could see). All in all a wonderful poem.

I'm so glad you made it here Greg, I look forward to reading more from you. Have a look around, we've so many things to offer that you'll spend hours here, guaranteed!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-14 12:44 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, we're all so happy you're here and sharing your dreams and thoughts with us all! (big hugggsssss) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, can we all have a piece of candy? (giggles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Greg, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

His Poet
Senior Member

since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

4 posted 2002-01-14 01:06 PM

Greg, I thought this was just lovely. Nothing else to say except keep on keeping on. Nice writing. Cheryl

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-01-14 01:08 PM

"Ah to be up there.
High above the trees.
With a whisper of a breeze to drink."

Very nice, and probably a welcome image to anyone living where the intense heat and dryness and wild fires can parch the throat and mind. Welcome to Passions.

mauddib
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 119
melbourne australia

6 posted 2002-01-14 01:54 PM

thank you one and all for your very kind words and welcome.
It makes me feel like I've come home.
Which word(s) were/was spelt wrong?
I am a notorious missspeller

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-01-14 02:24 PM

Mauddib~

This is just a wonderfully thoughtful piece~

'The coins from a thirsty desert dreamer,
Make their way down the well.
And if I could I would catch your coins
and take them down.
To where dreams and wishes are found.
And like candy,
I'd hand them all around.

What lovely thoughts~
WELCOME to PASSIONS ...
where the well is full of poets in friendship~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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