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Passionate search |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Imagine passion, Now see it come alive, Wait and enjoy it, Is it ecstasy at hand? Does it involve two or just one- Another comes by, Promising the same feelings- The copies of churned emotions, Once again become a folktale, Now the passion that subsides, After a while, it becomes a routine- The time to move on has arrived, Will it end the planning- Of the search for the ultimate- Mate? Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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mauddib Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 119melbourne australia |
Does it involve two or just one? Now that is a tricky one! from now on when I think of paradise, it won't be paradise on my own. A good test for a relationship I will remember this one. take care |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) So very thought-provoking, dearest friend, I always see passion as something that draws us to our dreams and consumes us eventually bringing us together out of grief, so I feel it can be two and one on different levels! (kiss on cheek) Wonderful, sweet friend, I love your wonderful words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ronil, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I thank you for your cool response Angel. Your comment has inspired me to write more. Ronil Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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