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Sunstricken
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Do you remember the day when I became the Sun? Shining so brightly that my radiance made your eyes go blind, your brain fevered with the heat of my sunstroke. Your blood boiled~~~ simmering to a high brew, bubbling up to the heart where love mixed emotion with hot blood. You panted after me as a deer pants after the pure waters of a babbling mountain brook; and I was poured through your hands, tasted and savored like a fine wine. I was the crescendo that you built with new rhythms, the Sun radiating infinitesimal beams of love through your soul. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Sooooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, you weave such beautiful sunbeams of light through your words that will always give melt the love of your life and sunburn him with passion! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are all our sunshine! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, I know the light of this very well! Thank you for sharing! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Noah recommened your poem to me, (i was about to come and read it anyway hehe) and I must say that it is awesome. I like the sun imagery, it warmed me up as I read it! RP |
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Fallon Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 21USA |
These are beautiful thoughts you have written here. Lovely images for the mind. 'A word is dead when it is said, some say. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ivy Rose, I remember an experience as this so well...just couldn't define, so glad you did. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ok, Ok, this is wonderful, this is what a rose should write,.....beautiful thoughts dear lady!!!!!!!!!! Kathleen-- |
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Ocelot Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 40Texas |
So sweet. This makes me reminisce...thank you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ivy Rose - wow, this is beautiful. What special words you have written... BC |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your first two lines brought a picture to my mind... it's a me I don't even remember, radiant with joy. *S* I like this sensual beauty very much, Ivy Rose. *S* I've never been the sun... but I have sought it. *S* Well done! |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Ivy...this is excellently written. A beautiful poem. I love it. alan |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Ivy, Gorgeous images in this one. I love it. Nan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivy Rose, A memory that still shines bright. Wonderful write. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
You panted after me as a deer pants after the pure waters of a babbling mountain brook; I loved it Ivy...very nice indeed...  ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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