Open Poetry #18 |
In Splendor |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
In Splendor Speak not to me in riddles enchant me not with rhymes simply say "I love you" that your life is mine Give my heartbeat wings, dance my dreams a-flutter release me from cocoon to sip the moon of butter Pause this mortal time bring heaven to this place wrap me in your arms in passion's flowing lace Summon the sun to melt the very breath of me unfold the yearn of you... promise infinity Spread the sky through my eyes as bold as the blue it veils shine the stars in mesmerize through seduction's sails Infuse my skin with spark, lay me down in splendor kiss my wanton sigh dip me in surrender Lick my luscious laugh, make me your delicacy, dine in kismet bond - the grandest intimacy Sing not to me in riddles crown me not with rhymes simply say "I want you" that your fate is mine By Melissa P. Monette [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (01-13-2002 10:59 PM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is stunning! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet Melissa, your lovely words are always so romantic and sensually gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much, may true loves happiness forever shine in you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
This is very beautiful, Melissa. Thank you for sharing. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This was lovely Melissa...very creative ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
poetically wonderful Melissa. . . great form and rhythm. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Summon the sun to melt the very breath of me unfold the yearn of you... promise infinity Spread the sky through my eyes as bold as the blue it veils shine the stars in mesmerize through seduction's sails Infuse my skin with spark, lay me down in splendor kiss my wanton sigh dip me in surrender Lick my luscious laugh, make me your delicacy, dine in kismet bond - the grandest intimacy ======================================= Sultry and smmmmooooth as cadenced butter .... your muse is on fire Melissa girlie....and we get to delight in its afterglow this is beautiful!!!! keep em coming sweet poetess jm Even thru the darkest phase, be it thick or thin |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One of my favorites...James |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
WOW!!! I'd like to say something more articulate.. but this.. so magnificient.. it steals my words away DOUBLE WOW!!! Pepper |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Melissa, Amazing write! But then I expected no less of you. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dearest melissa; I always need a huge "Sigh", and then take a deep breath, after I read your poems. This one is a breathtaking romantic gem! Hugs, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So beautiful, I just love it. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Melissa, An awesome tapestry of beauty and romance...Magical! Love, Elise |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
It's beautiful Melissa. I love your poem. (By the way I'll be waiting for my Million in monopoly money.) |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, what a soft sensual beauty you write!, it's good to read you again |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, How sweet and strong, this poetic request asking for affirmation and anticipated fulfillment. Well Done. Dennis :^) |
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