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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
You are more than what you seem if you but look beyond the dream Take what is given down deep inside for those might not be dreams which you deride They could be strengths hidden away aching to come out, and have their say Given gifts, of poem and prose even words to share, in times of lows Too easy to stay back from light of day instead of looking forward, down the way Feel the warmth that is not sun but the inner glow that has begun Let the breeze push you along the rhythm of heart, sing its song Forget the past, except what it will teach for there is nothing, that is, beyond your reach Open your eyes to the beauties around smell the flowers instead of being down Grab hold of life and begin to live share what is you, and what you can give In the giving, you will find what goes out, stays not behind For what you give, you may never know how the ripples spread in gentle flow |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you always make it seem so easy...smiling, both life AND poetry! (as if there is a diffence. Ever an inspiration to me, M'Lo! HUGS. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Logan , This is truly beautiful poetry and oveflowing with God's eternal Wisdom! Thank you! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan--I know the wisdom and truth of this. Very well said, dear friend! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Logan, I love this, and evey word rings true! The last stanza sums it all up... "In the giving, you will find what goes out, stays not behind For what you give, you may never know how the ripples spread in gentle flow" Perfect, gentle keeper. A warm hug and a soft smile, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do not know if you have been around long enough to know the term IWIHWT, but it stands for….I wish I had written this… I really do…. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Read this once..then read again its rhymes... read it carefully...read between the lines read the wisdom whispered upon the wind read the words spoken round the circle of friends. A poet born a prophet ... lays another stick on the fire.... to grow in his light ... will allow you to fly higher.  Even thru the darkest phase, be it thick or thin |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Upbuilding and Inspiring. You've made my day. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very true.....so very true Kathleen--(Kay) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"For what you give, you may never know how the ripples spread in gentle flow" this is a message I try to teach my kids.... both positive and negative ripples happen....it matters what you do.... ahhhh Logan.... I love this  with all that you are... with all that you know... love...... [This message has been edited by SEA (01-13-2002 09:28 PM).] |
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HumbleBee Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 52Kentucky |
A very inspirational poem, Logan. We all have strengths hidden deep inside and our family and friends help us to find those strengths. When we stop dreaming, we cease to live...I love your poem. |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
May you always be so giving and thanks for the gift of you wisdom. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Once again your campfire glows with truth and wisdom, and the words flow like ripples in a quiet pond when a thinking stone is tossed. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What an inspiration this is! Beautiful words of wisdom, indeed...this should be on a plaque Have you ever thought of getting your poetry published? Well, here's one honeybee who would gladly buy a copy!Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Serenity, as always, you are much too kind..very gentle smile Thank you, Ellie, for the read, I am happy that you enjoyed it..very gentle smile Yes, Martie, but all we can do is try. Thank you for being here...very gentle smile Nancy, very gentle smile..you have much wisdom at your fingertips all the time..Thank you..very gentle smile Now, Sis, you are being kind, for all you write way overshadows this, but thank you..very gentle smile JM, very gentle smile..ahhh, you are too kind..thank you for the read Thank you, JK, now you have made my day..Appreciate your read and comment..gentle smile Ahh, SEA, yes, we never do know how far those ripples will go. Besides, I bet you are a pretty good Mom, also...very gentle smile HumbleBee, I appreciate your words and your presence..very gentle smile..thank you Thank you, DonFurr, for your comments and your read..gentle smile Ahh, yes, Midnitesun, the thinking stone..may there always be a supply of them..very gentle smile..thank you Aww, Melissa, now you are way too kind..thank you for such nice words...very gentle smile |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, such beautiful wisdom shines from your pen, sweet friend, I love it!!! As long as we believe in ourselves and cherish our dreams to our hearts content, we will find true happiness as we continue to share our love to others and find this love coming back to our hearts from others! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is a true keeper! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Logan, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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