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Lover's Breeze
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Lover's Breeze |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Beyond the heaven, past the Sun Two lovers join, become one. Before the dawn takes the moon love abounds, flames consume. The twilight glows in eyes as love grows, does not disguise. Two hearts within bodies beat as passion’s flame does heat. Light kisses fuel life driven quest of yearning within living breast Soft love sounds fill the trees as skins bare are touched by breeze. Upon a bed of nature’s own two bound as one, not alone. Lying beneath a shimmering sky now as one in sleep lie. [This message has been edited by Magnus (01-13-2002 04:20 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, oooohhhhh...I love this rhyme scheme and meter of yours, I too always love to try and write in different forms! (big hugggssss) You are truly a King Of Passion, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hmmm...I would think it be you who is on the roll, Sir.... so enjoy your writings...pen on! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Love the form of this, a very graceful study of couplets and the last verse emphasizes the completion of the poem. Very lovely thought put into this Magnus!  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ahhhhh I do like it a lot. Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes Barry, this is a very nice change of pace for you....nice, I love it!  ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautifully said as always..lovely images ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Your words of two lovers is touching. The beauty of relationships can be found in your lines. More, Give me more. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I am glad you sent that clone I was beginning to wonder if he would ever get here...**big hugs**  Well done...Master of RomanceLove I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
thank you my young friend Noah... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karilea...no way that I am on the roll that you have been today...so I will consider this a complement well received... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Serenity, I just felt that I needed to try a different view...even I get tired of writing the same way...I am sure we all do... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Charisma....you are most welcome... giving you girls something to smile over makes me feel good... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy...glad you enjoyed the different way of saying the same thing....thanx |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Victoria...thanx bunches...Mag. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
J.K. M. Oh yes...there will be more... what I love to do best... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
karen...good...glad the clone arrived... Make sure you treat him kindly...feed him once in a while...he thrives on romantic poetry from the ladies...and if you have a spare comp. well...then I will have to ensure HE doesn't write as romantically as I do.. |
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