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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-01-12 10:53 PM

Light of the moon flowing over a radiant face.
Lying peacefully in wait of a shadow’s embrace.
Breath flowing effortlessly through moistest lips.
Sleep bringing dreams as a shadow’s heart trips.

I love you, can’t your sleep allow you to hear?
I desire you, need you..must again have...my dear.
My darkened presence will your slumber grace
as lightly across curves lingering fingers trace.

A moan becomes a crescendo of softest sighs
as my gaze is cast into each of your closed eyes.
The stir of your passions shall not awaken you
while a river of love flows within hearts of two.

The set of the waning moon brings return of day.
And as a shadow departs, soft words will once say..
Awaken my love, for I must again bid you goodbye
till once again in dreams we’ll both soar the sky.

Goodnight my love...

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-01-12 11:19 PM

Magnus - a warm loving write, only as you can do. Liked this one very much...

BC

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-01-12 11:24 PM

Barry...Oooooooh Myyyy...there you go again!
Warming up the temps in Canada!
~Hugs, Nancy~
And...this one is a beauty!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-01-12 11:26 PM

Thanx BC...something for the ladies to sleep
with tonight...

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

4 posted 2002-01-12 11:27 PM

Beautifully romantic.
-Silver Streak

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-01-12 11:27 PM

Yep Nancy....I thought there was a cold
front coming your way....so I decided to
send you some warm air...pleasant dreams..

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-01-12 11:28 PM

Thanx Newell, pleased to meet you here
at PiP...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-12 11:29 PM

(sigh) Sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, may you always see her eyes before you fall asleep and awaken to see her love appear before you forever! (sigh) I love this, dearest friend, your words are always fabulous! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-01-12 11:31 PM

Noah, you are one of the kindest young men
I have known...your sincerity speaks volumes.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2002-01-13 10:37 AM

"something for the ladies to sleep with tonight?????"

I missed this before I went to sleep last night!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

10 posted 2002-01-13 10:41 AM

This sits in the glorious realm of sleep-wake, a warm, quiet tide of welcome...

beautiful, Magnus...

Canuckster
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since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

11 posted 2002-01-13 10:43 AM

Very nice piece of work, Magnus. Very touching.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

12 posted 2002-01-13 11:23 AM

"till once again in dreams we’ll both soar the sky" Oh this is just a wonderful poem Magnus, I love it. floria

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

13 posted 2002-01-13 11:29 AM

Magnus darling boy this is wonderful truly fabulous writing here. The flow is fabulous and the dreams this wanders in ahhhhhh poetry at its utter best

Well written my friend this is soooo very very good

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

14 posted 2002-01-13 11:32 AM

You are the master of romantic writes.Well done!

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

15 posted 2002-01-13 11:35 AM

Beautiful Mr. Valentino

~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

16 posted 2002-01-13 12:41 PM

Kay...sorry I didn't get this out before you
went to sleep...thanx...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

17 posted 2002-01-13 12:42 PM

Karilea...thank you...very pleased that you
enjoyed this.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2002-01-13 12:43 PM

Canukster....interesting pen name...

thanks much...your enjoyment give my heart
pleasure.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

19 posted 2002-01-13 12:44 PM

Floria....a smile on my face....thank you..

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

20 posted 2002-01-13 12:50 PM

Smooth and soothing...James

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

21 posted 2002-01-13 12:58 PM

Magnus - oooh I am glad I didn't read this last evening or I would have never gotten to sleep!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

22 posted 2002-01-13 03:52 PM

This is so beautifully romantic, Barry that it gave me the chills!!!
Absolutely perfect!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

23 posted 2002-01-13 06:18 PM

Marsha...thanx as always and this one should
not have made you cry....so I am safe...I
hope

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

24 posted 2002-01-13 06:19 PM

*giggling* well...I bet Lou went to bed early just so she could have this one read to her..

I love it and wished I had seen it last night but tonight it will help me to dream of my phantom lover....Wonderful writing, Magnus. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

25 posted 2002-01-13 06:19 PM

sodpossum...thank you, I consider that a
complement...

Magnus

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Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

26 posted 2002-01-13 06:21 PM

Victoria...you flatter me...thanx...Val/Mag..

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

27 posted 2002-01-13 06:21 PM

JM...always appreciate your kindness...
thanx..

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

28 posted 2002-01-13 06:22 PM

Oh my...Nightshade...I guess that I better
soften up my late evening poetry...thanx..

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

29 posted 2002-01-13 06:23 PM

Madame C. Oooooo, chills? Hmmmmm???
thanx...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

30 posted 2002-01-13 06:25 PM

Yep Karen...watch out for the shadow coming
around the corner...up over the border and
well....anywhooo...like I said...the clone
will arrive tomorrow...

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J. K. Mitchell
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since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

31 posted 2002-01-13 07:11 PM

Lovely!

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