Open Poetry #18 |
Universal Rhythm |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
\Universal Rhythm/ The rhythm of the sun by day the tandem beat of moon by night while the dance of moon flower play and screech of owl inhabit night. We sing our songs, our living’s score, and labor to the tune of rain. We play along the sandy shore in ripples of the sea’s refrain. In pirouettes of heart’s content, we float about on lark’s sweet strain, ‘bove hills and valleys in arbored scent all quilted in ripe golden grain. The ken of man is awesome, yes, yet microscopic, beyond compare, beside the Great Creator’s dress of universe’s everywhere. ©January 13, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I agree with you, Virginia! God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Yes, yes, we are such a beautiful and dazzling part of life, but yet only a microcosm to the entire world of Love before us, where the owls screech and te songbirds sing and every sunrise and sunset alarms us with promises yet to come! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Virginia, I count this among your best. Mighty applause and total agreement here. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi VAS, This was just beautiful, a keeper forsure, so very much enjoyed. Love. Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh I can just hear the music VAS and I love the line" the greata Creator's dress" lovely poem. floria |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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